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Many readers make the mistake of thinking about something to say about the topic then writing it down, then thinking about another topic and writing it down until the paper is filled. When you write a sentence you create an expectation in the readers mind that in some way you will expand on the first sentence. In order to keep from making this mistake it is important to re-read what you have written to make sure it makes sense.
You also need to make it easy for the reader to follow by using transitions to slowly move from one subject to the other. An effective way to use a transition is by using pointing words, which is referring back to some concept in the previous sentence.
Also you can repeat yourself, but in a way that avoids sounding monotonous, and be careful not to leap from one point to another. While writing it is encouraged that you write with the types of expressions that you would use in everyday life with the combination of educated writing skills that you learn in college. Blending your own personal writing style along with the academic style gives your writing more punch.
You must always take in account the audience to who you are writing to and the purpose of your writing. There is a specific time to use your own style and when to be formal. If you are writing to a business then you need to be more formal, but if you are writing to an audience then you can write more creatively.
As a writer you need metacommentary to tell readers what you mean and guide them through your text. When you use matacommentary you will develop your ideas and generate more text and depth to your writing. Posted by HeD at PM. Anonymous March 13, at AM. Unknown September 9, at AM.
Unknown November 7, at AM. Return to Book Page. Cathy Birkenstein. In addition to explaining the basic moves, this book provides writing templates that show students explicitly how to make these moves in their own writing. Get A Copy. Paperback , pages. Published January 10th by W. More Details Original Title. Other Editions Friend Reviews. To see what your friends thought of this book, please sign up. I have a class this semester that calls for the 3rd edition of this book.
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Very interesting premise, namely, looking at academic writing as participating in a dialogue. It's a fascinating idea that goes back to at least Greek roots in the Socratic dialogue.
Come to think of it, some Eastern teachers use that technique as well; I'm just not well-versed in non-Western history.
I think it's a technique that helps a student place their work in a larger conversation, and elevate an academic essay above the "explanatory" work into a work that defends or promotes a viewpoin Very interesting premise, namely, looking at academic writing as participating in a dialogue.
I think it's a technique that helps a student place their work in a larger conversation, and elevate an academic essay above the "explanatory" work into a work that defends or promotes a viewpoint. The writers' mission can be summed up: "Yet despite this growing consensus that writing is a social, conversational act, helping student writers actually participate in these conversations remains a formidable challenge.
This book aims to meet that challenge. Its goal is to demystify academic writing by isolating its basic moves, explaining them clearly and representing them in the form of templates.
The second section, "I Say," leads the writer how to respond to the "they say" arguments, and how to distinguish one's own position from differing ones. Incidentally, my professor had us read Martin Luther King's "Letters from a Birmingham Jail" which uses nearly every instance of these techniques, and is a truly impressive essay.
For that alone, I'm grateful to her. The third section addresses analysis and conclusions, and shows how to connect the parts, using one's own voice and metacommentary. The last section addresses writing within specific settings, namely, writing for science, in the social sciences, entering class conversations and deciphering author viewpoints.
Each chapter ends with a few exercises which lead the reader through understanding the technique and how to implement it. Contains templates to help beginning academic writers formulate ideas, and has a number of specific suggestions throughout to help writers integrate these techniques.
Overall, an interesting read for an academic book. It was required reading for an English Composition class. I wouldn't have mind having run into this in high school or college when I first started academic writing.
Four stars for quality of ideas, approachability and useful techniques, if not actual enjoyment. View 2 comments. Sep 01, Ayla rated it it was ok. My two stars are generous. If you need this book's atrocious templates to write a paper, you have some serious literary remediation to do. The templates, when strung together into a disjointed paragraph of concessions and cliches, make for an amazingly boring and unoriginal essay.
Even when incorporated into an otherwise mediocre paper, they stand out as obvious regurgitations of what the writer feels an academic paper "should" say. Any scholar who pridefully publishes the words "I'm of two mind My two stars are generous.
Forgiving the contractions and weak verbs, because frankly I don't plan on writing an article on this template, this template lacks anything resembling style or interest to the reader. Orwell would shit his pants reading that read "Politics and the English Language" if you want realistic and credible writing advice.
The writer did absolutely no thinking in composing that phrase. You're not sure? That's what you say when the waiter mentions the restaurant's special on fried squid testicles. Give me a clear position and argue it. And stop with the damn contractions. View all 8 comments.
Sep 15, Jack rated it really liked it. My writing is often competent, but not as effective as I'd like. I bought this expecting to screen it for use as a corrective to my students. I found it surprisingly useful for myself, although at a fairly detailed level.
The most useful thing they say, which I should have known already, but didn't, is that it is critically important to remember that one's academic writing is a contribution to an ongoing discussion that one's reader likely has not been paying close attention to. As such, one nee My writing is often competent, but not as effective as I'd like. As such, one needs to bring the reader up to speed on where the discussion was "They Say" , to make it clear why one's own contribution makes any sense.
Not genius, but useful For your amusement: I came across it in Stanley Fish's provocative column on spending an entire semester trying to teach college students how a sentence works. I was skeptical of the templates and worried that they would limit my students and lead to formulaic writing, but instead they helped students organize their thoughts, express more complex ideas, and frame their arguments as part of a larger conversation.
After only a few exercise with the templates, I noticed students incorporating them into their writing on their own and doing so effectively. I would recommend using this book judiciously as a tool to help students organize their writing, but be careful not to overdo it.
For a book on academic writing, this was excellent. I wish this kind of thing, however, would be promoted at a much broader level. Computer Ram issues can also return weird actions if they are not seated correctly, failing and or configured in the bios especially if you have mixed brands. Other hardware in the device manager could be causing the issue due to them not installing and configuring correctly.
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